whoa •-• i... just... whoa.
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Hey there.

I just wanted to say bravo on your an for this chapter. I've lurked all over this site and there are so many stories that submit to the whole 'love conquers everything' idea and which have completely messy, tragic, horrible plot lines be solved by simplistic romantic twists and i am so glad you said no. Because it's like junkfood for the soul, and what you are doing is so much better.

I know it's been a while since you've updated, but I really hope you'll revive this story. It's absolutely wonderful; I'd hate for it to go unfinished.

This is a better schizophrenic character story I've ever read, and several of those were professionally published. (though one was close to this in the sense of a paranoid schizophrenic who heard voices that said things similar to, "He'd look good in red.")

hasn't been letting me post reviews for the last couple of days but this story is SO. DAMN. DEPRESSING.

poor joann i can only imagine what it would be like to be in her situation... it would be terrible :(

oh no...

*cringe*

its making me so sad to imagine real people like this... it breaks my heart. but i love the story anyways...

well he seems to be doing better :) I'm glad he's able to focus and speak coherently now, I think that's a nice big step...

You are completely in the right.

It's not that I don't like romance. Hell, most of what I write is romance.

But in a story like this it has no place.

The characters and the hell their going through comes first. Especially something this real that affects so many people.

Well done and wisely said. The quote was perfect.

Poor Puck.

I was excited to see what issue you chose for him. God, I just realized how that sounds.

But anyway, I think this fits him.

He's always so tough and to have that mask crack and fall away...

Anyway, I look forward to more.

I'm so glad there was an update! It's amazing, as usual. I really hope you can delve into schizophrenia more and how it works; because I liked the little snippet into Puck's journal-type notebook where there was a glimpse into the chaos the disease causes mentally. Update again soon if you can, please! :P

good chapter, it was interesting to see Shelby again, keep up the good work! update soon!

Amazing job! It was great to see Shelby's fear for Beth and Puck's mum lost and tired and realising there is really something wrong with her son. So sad for Puck, his family and friends.

I love this story and can't wait for your next update, xoxo.