That was really good. _ And I mean it. _ You got into his head very well, and you made it come pretty much alive. _ Almost like it was a part of the original plot in the show. _ It's really great! I'll go see the rest of your works. _

another slightly odd one. but o well. finish toshikis secret and revenge is a dish best served naked pls! (wow, i keep on asking for that one, ne?) o'.'o

In-ter-res-ting O.o It was goood. Nice... Kenish.

cool! i never really considered the matter this way, but it's something to think about.

I liked. Muchly. I've always liked the "Ken saves Iori" ep. And I love this take. I'd kill to see a continuation, or maybe a sequal from Iori or one of the other's pov, but you said one shot...oh well. I can dream...Can't I?

Hmm...interesting...Ken wants 2 be friend s Ahh _

I think it's good. Different from your usual style, I could really hear Ken's tone of voice. And a new topic too...cool!

Hey, I thought it was pretty good, don't knock it; good take on Ken's emotions. I'd never thought of it from this perspective, either, very intriguing. Nice. _

lol it was just fine empress. Very nice for a short one shot. And I hope the other computers in your house get fixed soon! So you can go back to writing more.

Oooh, very nice! I love how you pictured Ken in this fic . You are so awsome, lol :P

Wow... nice. And so true. So true. Much likeness. )

That was frickin' awesome - just like I imagined Ken to think! You captured the character BEAUTIFULLY! I want your talent... GIVE IT TO ME! lol.

I really liked this fic... Assumptions can be very dangerous .

*sighs* empress, honestly! are you stuck with writer's block or something? what's with all this short, pointless, BORING junk? i've got an idea, why don't you read this fic: . ?storyid243478 It's called Untouched and Alive and it is the most amazing fic in the whole world. i have never read anything that comes close to it. maybe if you read it, you will get your unique, interesting ideas back. im not meaning for this to be a flame, but i cant help it! i like most of your other work (especially On The Road and Nothing But You). so please, PLEASE, stop writing like this! You. Are. Better. Than. That. and its not just the shortness of these fics that bothers me. short fics arent that bad, but the QUALITY of them isnt too great! okay, now go read that fic and get your ability back!

ken: you sure are acting vicious today!

guinea: sorry! i really really am! i just dont want to see one of my favorite authors to go under! i adore your fics empress (well, except for these latest ones). i am really, extremely, sorry if this seems anywhere near a flame! now i feel really bad, but somebody had to tell you! it seems like all that everyone else wants to do is kiss your (ahem) ass! so i am sorry, but i dont want to lie to you! (