A very interesting and realistic look into the way Mozzie's mind works, nicely done!

I like the idea, whish they would really do that . Short, but very in character :-).

I really like the idea that Neal actually did send Mozzi a postcard. xD

Only thing is that happy ever afters should be happily ever afters, I think. I would have done something different for where he was explaining why he wasn't shocked, just because he used the "Happy endings aren't for guys like us" line in the show. I think if you cut that line out, you could either add something else or leave it as is.

I also thought that he would be horrified at it, but the more I think about it, the more the "Well, Alex is better for him anyway," response seems to fit Mozzi. xD So, it works.

Anyway, it was good, favorited and all that, Keep up the good work! :)

Good thrust to the piece and nice POV work. You said you live for constructive criticism, so here it is: axe the first line, fix the two places where you slipped into the present tense by accident, add a comma after the italicized word "dying," and you're good to go.

Cheers,

Kiki

Interesting turn of events. I like how you summed up all the emotions in only a few sentences, although I wish it was longer, that way I could enjoy more of it. Keep writing.

-Vendetta

concise and to the point...but I guess that was all Neal had to say on the matter...Mozzie should be happy to elarn that Neal is alive and back at Junes..