This was pretty good.

I'm not sure if it was really compliant with the phobia for the most part, but it was well-written

hahaha Poor Albus! xDD

btw, you totally stole my character! O! that's technically my Mandy only with diferent looks (##!)

Also, there are some spelling mistakes, Love .

but, all in all, that was pretty cool!

Gii3.

I liked it and it was a good phobia matched with the character but I wonder if it would have worked better if the situation had been waiting in line for the Sorting Hat.

WOW. where did you come up with Mandy? Everything was done really well- you just need to describe things like the lake more, and work on your spelling.

It was quite good though xxxxxxxxxxxxx

It's a good idea, but you are in need of a beta... The writing isn't as good as it could be. Nevertheless, nice use of the challenge.