When I first read the summary , I was thinking : " What could this be about ? " , since it was so unspecific , but I'm glad it turned out to be so interesting ! You should really update , detaliate the story of the Fey and , what I'm waiting for the most , write more about Angel and Merrin ! He needs his happy ending , too . :) Really good story , keep writing !

I love the Septimuus/Jenna couple!

ohhh... i love the story so far! please update soon!

Right so I was intrigued by the summary and decided to give this a closer look. Now I will admit that when I read the name Angel I had warning bells going off in my head and I was thinking to myself not another Mary Sue OC. I was pleasantly surprised after I'd read a fair bit of it that she was coming across as fairly three dimensional. This is good, no? I like this and I would read it if you posted more.

I luv the JenxSep pairing... I HATE THE MERRIN AND ANGEL PAIRING (no offence meant) i prefer Angel and Nicko.. and Merrin and err some other weirdo lol!

NO OFFENCE MERRIN- DW i aint no merrin hater, nah i luv him and all i just don't rly love the paring, is all-

Great story so far please do continue! :)

very good first chapter. Not confusing in anyway, except for the "fey" part. Good job! ;)

it's nice. I like it. I haven't really paid much attention to Septimus Heap in a while so i just happened to read your review and decided to drop a review.

* On the subject of Jenna cussing, she's 18. as far as i saw, in Syren she's 15 if i'm not mistaken. (It's not her fault her dress feels like a corset, my aunt's bridesmaid dress that she had tailored for me felt like one too)

...\o/...

Sasha