ah! *blows nose*

Normally, I hate poems. I don't even bother giving one a second glance. I don't know what compelled me to read this, but I'm glad that I did. You did a very nice job on this little piece.

PS plz update ur other AxL pieces.

Wow...that was beautiful

::tear falls down cheek:: while i am not a slash fan aside from humor ::another tear falls:: that was moving ::sobs openly:: that was wonderfully beautiful...but you're wrong. he was saying it to me :P jp, keep writing!

how beautiful! the only thing is there's no actual plot but it's a poem so i guess that's ok

Heres your cookie! *hands over a plate of chocolate chip cookies* Enjoy! This story is so sad, yet its really pretty at the same time.

Dear Mikayla,

I really need to go to the bathroom. So please stop asking what I think abiut your stories. Otherwise it's a good poem.

The End

Hey Liki! That was sa you're right here, staring at this, but, still, it's sad. It's goo got me all freaked out that 'Golas was gonna die! Now to read your other ones . . .

Hi, my poor little Legolas ! I'm not a slash fan, but I find your poem quite good. I a fan of Bastard ! and I write Bastard's fics too. They will be on the site soon, by the name of Maspalio. So, if you have time, you can read them. I'm sorry if my English isn't good, but I try to do my best !

Bye!

I allready told you what my opinion of this is. Is it just me, or did that other guy who reviewed say porn?

Sad! me likes!

Niiiiice poem. Not a big slash fan, though.

Umm..oh, just a thing, how did he die? Because he can only be killed by fire, steel or perhaps grief..

ANYHOO, very good poem!