That was so funny. Great scene expansion piece. :D

Way to go, Super A! The litmus test for any fan fiction of a TV show for me is hearing the characters' voices in my head as I read their lines. And you nailed Evan square on the head. Perfect Evan rambling.

Ari, I swear, you are such a brilliant writer.

I mean, I've never even HEARD of this show, and I already like it. Just from your fanfiction.

Not to mention you've only written two stories about it, and one was only dialogue.

So you're like, a writing genius or something.

I liked this story. Evan sounds really cute.

And I really have to see this show now. :D

Anyways, good work Ari.

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Sami.