Wait... Auntie Anne and Uncle Amos? Like... the pretzel place and Famous Amos cookies?

heh...i don't know if some people ever get the message. they don't quite match up, true, but i think they each have their merits. great work, as always, man

awesome rewrite so far, man. i seem to notice a few minor errors (spelling, grammar, etc) but, all in all, very well done. Definitely better than the original, though there wasn't much wrong with it to begin with. Call me a purist, but I tend to prefer originals to remakes (whether we're talking video games, books, or whatever)

I like where this is going, though I wonder just how much will change. I hope you keep writing this, even as you write the sequel. It's nice to see Minatos show up early.
Now, I don't want to tell you how to write your story, but if you want to include another Devil Survivor reference in, you can make Minato a fan of D-Va (Haru's band). I've been playing Devil Survivor recently, and Haru's probably my favorite character.
Anyway, can't wait for an update! Keep up the awesome!

Just read through all of, this, and i am loving it! You've done an awesome job of blending the gameplay elements in with the story telling, and i really like the MC's character, I wish you the best of luck with your missions, and hope you return soon to continue!
nERO

You, sir, are the king of everything that blows mind

That is all

PS. I want more blood and gord. Though, that's probably just me.

I'm not even gonna ask for more Epic 'cuz I know you'll do that without anyone asking

Love this fic!

"Tartarus?" he asked. "The hell's that? Sounds like toothpaste."

wtf? that's exactly what my mom said! xD

I was lead here by Casey W's P$: Face Every Shadow, and I must say that I am not disappointed! A really interesting take on the game, and an extremely high-quality piece of work.

...God, I feel like my English teacher. I'm going to stop that, now.

But, yes. We English are awesome. And this story is awesome, too.

While I love Fairly English Story, I have to admit, for a rewrite, there are a few mistakes, and it doesn't seem to different to the original.

Dude I just read the story bashin ur fic. If u read it, don't let that jerk get 2 u. Personally I'm just leaving this review bcuz I thought u should know. I haven't read ur fic yt but I will...2morrow! :D I start skool 2morrow so I need my beauty sleep tonite XD: but if u haven't read it, u should check it out. It's called destructive criticism. I 4got the name but it had saffire in it. But seriously don't let that jerk bring u down. I haven't read ur fic but I bet it's good. I'm judging on the amount of reviews btw. Ne who even if the fic is not 4 me keep on writing 4 he ppl who no doubtedly luv ur story!

Sonic, Shadow, and their soundtrack is the absolute $#!.

HELL. YEAH.

I am all, I am all of me...

Like a sack of bricks, that last reference finally hit me.

Then again, I hadn't heard of that series until after my second time reading through this.

Crazy awesome story is crazy awesome. Minato is a giant dick but is still cool anyways. Need to go read Version 1 now, even if it is less Crazy Awesome and more Crazy Fun.

this has 2 b the best P3 fic ever! i always thoght that Minato deserved 2 b way more badass and awesome. his narrative style is awesome, and very funny as well. i read the original FES fic, but this version is way better! max respect 2 u SamJaz-sama!