Awwwwwww! MAJOR AWWWWW! So cuuuuuute! I'm imagining the last scene... teh 4 of them then *black and white foof*

Haha, I like the Tiva conversation in the car, funny.

sweet story

Oh, I like the bit at the start where Abby asks to break a rule; that's very in character, so much so I reckon they shold use it in the show

Azzi

Aww, Muffin sounds really cute. This chapter is very sweet. I love it

Azzi

This is a cute story and I like the song you chose. My favorite part was the end when they were lying on the bed with the animals.

cute story

I'll be looking forward to the moment when you get it typed from paper. I'm luvin' this, I hope McGee is okay

Azzi

I usually hate one of the fics when a main character ends up in mortal peril but this one is very good already. I never understood why Abby ended it with McGee and I'm pretty sure that it would take something like this to make her take her head out of her butt.

I look forward to the next update.