really good. update soon!

Good story cant wait to read more.

and the darkward appears. lol. i like this story! update soon!

Really good! Update asap!

yes i agree darkward stories are entrancing, if thats even a word, but you get my point :)

this is good! update soon :)

This ias an awesome chapter!

Update as soon as you can!

-The love of hate

WOW! This story looks really promising!

Please update soon :)

cant wait for more:)

A couple of little things... you switch tenses in the first chapter ("It's not everyday complete strangers offer things like that", from previous past tense) which affects the flow a little. And you don't generally say you're "very" elated- elation is a strong enough emotion, putting another descriptor in front of it just sounds a bit awkward. Otherwise, I think your writing has some real promise- I loved how, when Edward was looking at her 'library', Bella thinks "My life might as well be a book"- it really suited her sense of humour, I think, and sums up how he's just looking directly into her life. Anyway, keep it up! Chloe

can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice Concept.

I love it, update as soon as you can.

-The love of hate

sounds cool :)