I *LIKE* the Valdemar part!

I really like what you did in the end, making them retain everything from Velgarth. Do Cassy and Jake retain their lifebond? This was a great fic, btw.

Ax becomes a type of MONK? He's sword-sworn and that does not make him a MONK.

Me like the end, chuckles.

Wonderful! I hadn't thought about Animorphs in Velgarth before this, but it's a logical choice. Attacking a planet that has little chance for defense. Keep writing

This was very good. I can't wait to see the next section. I especially love the idea of them having to go back to school after living for fifteen years on another world, and having Marco and Jake wear clothes like they did in the other world!

Nice...love the beginning. We never really see Ax's side toward religion, if that makes sense. Anyway, great job! :-D

! No, no no, no no! This is PLAGARISM! You just took all the life stories of Misty's characters and wrote the names of new characters in! I could have stayed at home and just re-read the series! Velgarth is a pretty big place...why don't you try coming up with something really original?

I LOVE IT! You're crossing three of my absolutely favorite story worlds! I hope you get the next chapter out soon!

aer u a crossover obsessee?

Write more! It's not brilliant but still, for some strange reason I want more

Hey, I really like the ending. :) It's cool their "familiars"/swords/leshy'a Kal'enedral could come back too.

Getting better and better...trhe only thing that vaguely bugged me was Need...and I lovd the Firecat addition!

Any more? I _love_ Mercedes Lackey! *gryn*

It's spelled Ha'shin, not Ha'sin.

Umm... You DO realize that unless you clear up some questions, you have just shot the entire Heralds of Valdemar series to Hell and back? I mean, how is Need going to get to Kethry? If Liha'irden is slaughtered, who saves Tarma shena Tale'sedrin? Is she Queen Selenay? When does this happen? This is a truly enjoyable story, but so many unanwsered questions detract. However, not enough people write about Valdemar; at least, not here. This is very well thought out, and I like it, just too many nagging questions. Anyway, Zhai'helleva! Oh, and some of the stuff about the Kale'nedral was lifted entire from that first short story about Tarma and Kethry.