The word 'spy' wasn't used correctly. I meant that he was watching his girlfriend from a safe distance, waiting for her to leave the cosmetics department. He'd already embarrassed himself enough in it that he wanted to watch her until she left and then he'd go back with her. Instead he was still waiting for her to leave even after 20 minutes.
The salesman was always in the department selling binculars and cameras and noticed Jerry watching another customer. He works there and expected Jerry to buy something- it's not confusing.
I don't understand what you mean by '1-3 references every 2 - 3 episodes'. What does that mean?
And maybe you should read ALL of a story if you want to review it, not just 'most'. Sometimes answers to questions are answered in the last couple of paragraphs in some stories. Obviously an episode would be confusing if you watched it only up until the 20 minute mark and not all the way to the credits. Same thing here.

I read most of it. The jerry-with-girlfriend plot was confusing though. Why would Jerry spy on his girlfriend? There were more parts that confused me in that plot: After the spying part, how did the salesman notice Jerry? There's also the same problem with the references that I mentioned in my ''Tag, you're it'' review: even though this was written 2 years ago. Seinfeld had at least 1-3 references every 2-3 episodes. I haven't read your other stories in full yet. But, I will soon.

I loved this, this could have been an awesome episode, I can SO picture this happening. You, my friend, are awesome indeed. *skips off and favorites*

Cheers,

Artemis Vandelay

Thanks for reading my story!

Hope you also want to check out my 'Seinfeld' / 'Corner Gas' coross-over, "Invasion Of The Jerks From Wullerton".

Hilarious story and I loved the way you wrote Steinbrenner so well! Even included Lou Pinella! Very cool!

Another great job! I love these Seinfeld fics, keep them up! They are so true to the show.

Woah... you're really talented! I'm stunned! Good writing. Ever considered working as a screen writer?