I love this take on that episode!

Nicely done.

Nice, very nice.

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Nice missing scenes! The episode could have been greatly improved by them :-)

No "well rounded critique", Mizroy - just a note to say I really enjoyed this almost canon-like expansion on the episode. It definitely leaves the reader with the feeling that protocols can and will be overcome. Well done!

I enjoyed your story very much. It is good to see someone give Chakotay credit for being intelligent. And of course the end was perfect.