 ajundkj 6/11/11 . chapter 1I love this take on that episode! |
 katie janeway 4/23/04 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 Polgaria 6/8/03 . chapter 1Nice, very nice.
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 Doec 1/31/03 . chapter 1Nice missing scenes! The episode could have been greatly improved by them :-) |
 JinnyR 1/18/03 . chapter 1 No "well rounded critique", Mizroy - just a note to say I really enjoyed this almost canon-like expansion on the episode. It definitely leaves the reader with the feeling that protocols can and will be overcome. Well done! |
 Anne T.M 2/16/02 . chapter 1I enjoyed your story very much. It is good to see someone give Chakotay credit for being intelligent. And of course the end was perfect. |