I'm one of your big readers:)
I love the stories that you have written!
It's great!
And for this story, im wondering is't end or not…?! Just please give both Cloud and Tifa a sweet wedding!
And im also looking forward to know what kind of underwear has tifa prepare for Cloudhhhaa!

Awww..

What a wonderfully hot evening Cloud and Tifa had xD I was tempted to skip to the last part, but don't worry, I didn't do this :P It was nice of Denzel and Marlene to go to beds so early and without a fus. I wonder what Cloud bribed them with ;)

how many time am i gonna hafta tell u i love this and it is awesome well i hope the next chap is soon

Ohh I know the real reason why Cloud and Tifa's room is far from kids' room ;) They can't fool me.

Wow this story is pretty good!

Okay in chapter 6 when I read this part...

Tifa smiled at the red-head. "I'm sorry for interrupting. I just had a quick question." She turned to Cloud and asked, "What's for dinner tonight?"

He raised a brow. "Uh... shrimp manicotti? You haven't made that in a while."

Tifa smiled, wrapping her arms around Cloud's neck, nuzzling his nose. "I haven't had you in a while either..."

I LAUGHED SOOOOO HARD! HAHAHAHA gahhh that was HILARIOUS! Please update! :)

they are just too cute i wish they where mine

lol

Omg you finally finished this chapter! I can't believe it xD What exactly are the kids plotting hmm? Or is it Cloud plotting with the kids? ;)

awe so cute love it

D'awwwww. You're actually making me like Cloud. :3 I usually think of him as a emo jackass.

Finally got to read this! I love that part where Cloud is talking - thinking - about Tifa. The truth is, there wouldn't be Cloud without Tifa. Without her he would have stayed as a vegetable so yes, without her there could be no world. She saved his ass so many times and he is the one who is suppose to be her savior :P

I hope Tifa talks to Cloud about the execution thing. I would like to see his thoughts on that matter. And you know what, it would be great if there was more dialogues and interactions between characters, what do you think? :)

Okay, bring the next chapter on!

very good poor Tifa al least she got to slap her later lol next chap soon

Love this fic so far...they are so sweet together

Hope you update soon!

Awww that was a very sweet chapter Too bad it wasn't longer. Cloud's perverted thoughts sound promising lol...ahem. Please update as soon as you can :)

awe that was sweet as always i enjoy the scenes between them