WHAT
okay, so i understand your arguments, but is it absolutely necessary?
well, in case you change your mind, and do update, i'll put this story on alert.
its a great idea.

u do realize that herbology's neville's best subject? and that he's the best herbology student in canon?

glad harry knows he's stupid.

Well, you've made Harry out to be a stupid male ** in this story, so I suppose he deserves turds like Cho and Ginny.

This is ridiculous! What the hell is Hermione getting out of this? No payment, class credit, and a stupid potion.

Why is she with Ron at the start? Harry's being a terrible friend to her. Harry must really hate Hermione.

Only fools would want to keep Ron and Hermione together.

Popular examples of fools = Harry, Rowling

There are a few things wrong with this chapter: 1. It's been stated many times that you can't apparate inside Hogwarts, so I don't think that Lucius Malfoy will suddenly be able to do it out of the blue. 2. Quidditch matches don't take place so early into the Hogwarts term. 3. I doubt that the Hufflepuffs would be that nice as to just accept that they're probably going to lose, but fight to the very end so that the best team really does win. Besides that, I love the idea for this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

dullness?!?

Aww... what a sweet chapter!

No! Sob... oh, how sad. Poor Draco. I feel for him, and I love how you've portrayed his mother.

what? you think it's dull? I think your reviews show you people disagree! Please consider continuing it!

+*+Witch+*+

NO! come back! you can't just leave me w/ that, that was an awesome story that is in dire need of an ending! anyway, PLEASE come back and keep writing it, i would be extremely happy.

The only thing distressing around here is your haste to give up. I'll take a different approach then others and say not one compliment. Perhaps you'll take my critique to heart and be heated enough to finish the story strongly just to spite me. I don't mind if I end up being ambushed by all your fans- so as long as you stop being such a- excuse me French- imcompetant mule and continue the story.
Draco's personality is inconsistant. After living so long in Voldemort-supporting family, his attitude towards Griffindors is surely not to change just with one tutor in just a sort amount of time. You failed to show Hermione's strong-willed personality. To have nearly given up on Draco in the beginning does not express how stubborn and blindly kind-hearted she is.

Your attitude fails to impress me. Lack in will is a poor quality for a writer to have. I sincerely hope you can prove me wrong.

i was blown away by it. it was really good. i loved your paring. excellent fic. are you going to continue it? hope you do please do! i hope you do!
good luck-
xoxoxoxo

Damn - I was totally loving it and thought that maybe you'd finished it and then you went and stopped. Your writing is not at all crappy and you had lots of things that you could have done with the story; for instance, was Harry in love with Hermione? What does Ginny know about the situation, and what do the adult Malfoy's have to say about everything? I really liked the way that you didn't put anyone OOC and that you DID have a lot of consistencies. So I'm guessing this still won't persuade you to update it, but if you ever do then I will definitely read it. Well Done :)

you can't just DO that! please, keep writing, PLEASE!