u burst my bubble with the whole alec being the father...i still think he is...renfro would have done that just to be a biznotch

well, I'm late...I read the sequel, then the first chapter to the third installment, then the whole story of this. lol. Well, anyway, just wanted to tell you that this story is REALLY good. I actually like the way you added in all those cliff hangers. Keep up the good work!

Hey "chicketieboo" lol,

AWESOME JOB! This story was amazing I got so into it that when I was watching the real show I was expecting something to happen from this story line! You did an amazing job and I believe that you are definetely going to have a job in journalism one day! Your a terrific writer!

P.S.- I can't wait for the next chapter! And I really want to know who the father of the baby is, I know it will end up having some significance!

i love your story! i like how everyone knew everyone else but didn't know it... yeah, anyway... great job!

Oh God, oh God, oh God! That was sooo good! This is the first Dark Angel fic I've ever read, and I must say it was worth it... i think you just got me hooked on yet another show!

I found you through you review on X-Nina's X-Files X-Fic (*LoL*) "Nina's Fic," but why didn't you review her other fic? It's really good you know. Well, you should definitely make a sequel to this fic, if you haven't already done it. GOD you're good! :)

OMG! I loved it, completely loved it, and thankyou for such a great fanfic! Are you still looking for an editor? If you are, I'll be gald to help, but if not, don't worry about it. Once more, I completely fell in love with your writing. It was so great! I guess this is a bit long, so I'll go. I will heelp you with the editing if you want, and I LOVED your fanfic! Luv Penny

hi, great fic, great writing, great plotline. i just have one thing to pick (i'm like that, it's nothing personal):

"Wow Max, your awesome, of course you can have a job here." Kiki said lying on the floor, while Max leaned over top of her.

"Listen, you wanna go get a drink?" Kiki asked, being pulled up by Max.

"I would love to, but lately the thought of alcohol makes me sick..." Max said brushing off her pants.

"Oh I remember when I was pregnant, I went through that."

Max's face turned Pale, and her heart skipped a beat.

you said you might be writing a sequel (sp?) are you going to tie that in? -cait

Epiloge! Epiloge! I love this story, it's was a wonderful concept. You are a brilliant writer, and I can't wait to see more from you. If you do write an Epi then I think it should just be fluff. Pure, undiluted fluff. Then you *can't* have a cliffhanger.

Absolutely wonderful! I couldn't stop reading... Can't wait for the sequel!

Mm13

This story is so amazing! I have wanted Max and Logan to get together from the begginning and they did! Yay! Whos the father though? Wouldnt it be cool if manticore used logans dna and he is tingas father? Well, cant wait for more! Its great!

Great story! Love the ending and can't wait for a sequel.

Evil, evil, evil

you're absolutely evil

:D

holy crap! next chapter please! Can't wait!

sigh... why must you torture us poor readers... fine fine... i should be happy that you did post more chapters.. but ... it's still not enuff... i NEED more! please post the next part soon! i'm beggin' ya...

keep it up :)

Congradulations. You have written a fan fiction which i can not get out of my head, wondering what will happen next, as lately The Show itself is beginning to fail to do. You have my gratitude.