HAAAAGHHHHHH!

I wasn't expecting that, but I love it. Pms

Wow

I'm afraid that this will not be a good thing. Ashley seems so disassociated. Actually, Spencer does, too. It's almost mechanical ...no romance or passion or even lust there which is so weird. I'm not sure what to think. It just doesn't feel right. Like they weren't ready and it's a step back. Maybe I'm overanalyzing. I just don't like that it feels empty when nothing with them should ever be empty.

wow! such a good update. can't wait to see what happens

I'm speechless right now. No way did I ever think that was going to happen! Wow... I didn't think Spencer had it in her... or Ashley for that matter lol. Damn that was seriously awesome! I'm angry at whoever runs your internet and made me wait for this chapter lol! PMS please!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! Kat is definitely one of my favorite characters...of. all. time.!

just caught up with this fiction. so far its been great. is spencer tryna to get ashley to like...feel? what they were about to do can end up messing up either one of the girls. and my bet is ashley. so not sure what you're tryna do here

but I'm willing to wait for next update to find out. one thing I can say is that, you are A briliant writer. I am intrigued.

Kat makes me laugh. She's random and just out there, she's awesome.

Damn, the last part[s] were just like wow. Really and truly deep. It was great. It all felt so real. Like feeling all that Ashley was feeling.

This surely seems like it will complicate things, but I hope not much. How this will end, I don't know, but I hope for the best.

Anyways great update. I luv this story. I get so into it. Ha. Post soon please. [

#SouthofNowhereMovie!

now that i've read this five more times maybe i can come up with a more intelligent sounding comment. at first i was a little miffed that Kat was able to smooth over her slip up so neatly, but the ensuing drama more than made up for it. i hope you delve more into what made spencer act this way, because honestly it seems like a total 180 from their previous interactions. and when the yearbook comes...oh man shit's gonna get real.

love it. and your writing makes most other fanfiction unreadable. so thanks for spoiling me

definitely a plot twist. glad you've returned to us

Good gracious! That was so heart wrenching. What is going on with Spencer? I'm not sure why she agreed. Is she giving Ash want she thinks Ash wants or is she taking revenge on Ash for how she treats women? I really think this will haunt Ash for a while, and not be an overall good start if they have a relationship.

Totally did not see this coming. Ever.

But as always, beautifully and skillfully written. I'd read anything you post.

Thanks for the update and can't wait for more.

Whoa. I was not expecting them to hook up. Definitely a good surprise. ;)

NO! dnt end it there! :-( x

Oh wow