I really liked hearing both of their perspectives. Great job. Cute.

Yay. Boo.

"Let me explain... No, there is too much. I sum up."

I like the story, although again I think you go too brief. There is so much more here! You have the gift for writing they're internal monologues, so let them spend more time thinking. I love the general outline and the choices you make seem reasonable and in line with canon.

My only real negative reaction is with structure. Switching viewpoints between the two chapters impresses me as gimmicky, and less effective than your previous use of separate stories to address the opposing points of view. I suppose if the chapters were longer or greater in number I'd have no issue, but the switch was jarring and somewhat dissociative to me.

That said, I enjoy your work and thank you for your contributions to the WW community.

Oops, one more minor quibble. Very rarely do American Jews say "I went to synagog." You go to Temple. The synagog is the building where that happens. Still, I imagine no one cares about things like that but me.

mazel tov, ReverendKilljoy

All my previous comments on the prequel to this one still apply. :)

*Squeals* Oh, this is wonderful. I love this series of fics! Even though it's after ten at night I'm going to go right to the next one in the series and read that. I especially like the part from Donna's POV. Don't no why, maybe just because I'm a girl. Anyway, GREAT stuff. I can't wait to read more.

*Cheers* GREAT fic! I love Josh/Donna, togetehr and alone, and you write them VERY well.

Roses was great! and this is a nice little extra bit which is really gorgeous especially Josh's whole making love bit. Really beautiful!

I really enjoyed this story. I liked the prequel also and was pleased to see that you'd written a sequel. Both Josh and Donna's voice came thru very strongly. As a S/A shipper also I was glad to see the mention of their relationship also.

Will there be more stories in this universe? Because theres just no way that Josh can keep a secret this big from Sam. Or Amy might decide to 'forgive' Josh and drop by his apartment and get a big surprise.

Hey, this was really great! So romantic, I made all kinds of girly sounds (aww, ooh etc.) at the end- I love it! One request: Please write about the Sam and Ainsley portion of the story, those two are so cute together, and there aren't nearly enough! keep up the good work!

That was the most adorable Josh/Donna St-Valentine's Day story I've ever read. Very good, I LOVED it! Totally made me smile.