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I've always wanted to write something like this and you did it perfectly, exaaaaactly like how I wanted it. Thank you.

-Pepper

aww so sweet. I kinda felt bad for Jess in this but its okay. Never really liked Jess.

What a wonderful story.

I love how you wrote Sam's fear and need to call and check on his family.

Perfect moment when Dean's sleepy voice changed into the caring and worried big brother as he wondered why Sam was calling. I also like how you added John's voice in the background asking if "Is he okay?"

I enjoyed your story. I've always believed Dean would answer his phone if Sam called even if Sam wouldn't for Dean.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

You did an excellent job writing it.

This was brilliant. You totally pulled me in. It begs for a sequel. So much is left hanging and even more is left unsaid.

Grade A.

I just loved that. You had the boys' voices and characters down perfectly. I could visualize everything. Nice writing, sweetie.

God, I loved this. You managed to capture their speaking patterns so well. It was a real pleasure. And I was oh-so-prepared for the answer to "Jerk." I would have been mad without it lol Great job.

Love this. Brought tears to my eyes. I always thought Sam was so young to be out on his own without the comfort of being able to call his family whenever. How alone and detached he must of felt. I'm sure John was just talking out of anger when he told him he couldn't come back but Sam would not have known that. Thanks so much for this but I would love to see more of it!

Poor Sam! Glad Dean hadn't changed his number and that John was heard so Sam knows that despite kicking him out his Dad does still care. Great work!

Awwww, Sammy. You need to go back to your brother. He always makes everything better, didn't he?

Awesome story!

Great short fic, really well done and believable, could well imagine Sam having nightmares about something happening on a hunt and needing to ring Dean to make sure he was all right. And loved John asking if Sam was okay in the background.

Very good. I enjoyed it.

Sweet, simple and perfect. Well done!

Omg! This was awesome!

Utterly beautiful!

Loved john being heard as the rough voice in the background

Xx

Wow, this makes me wish I had a big brother like Dean. He's always there for Sam, no matter what. In a way I feel badly for Sam because he wants to return the same kind of love for Dean, but he just seems to have this inadequacy problem. Not that Dean would care. I love how you portray Dean here; the brother-father. John might mean well, but if Mary were alive, she'd kick his ass for being one.

Thank you for writing.