this is really good i hope you plan to continue this. please continue it.

Quite good. I like it.

'Nuff said.

You know, it's been a while since I checked up on the SoA fics. While you seem to be doing a lot all at once, it's all fairly good. But what do you intend on doing by making him into a bad guy? I don't expect you to answer, but I would like to figure it out eventually.

Well, at any rate, it's solid writing in all respects that I can think of. Nice job, and hopefully I'll see some of your projects through to completion.

WOW! Totally epic! I even got the first review too! If you EVER delete this I will fling a Pyrulen Spell at you! This has such WONDERFUL potential!