 Lahdolphin 11/15/10 . chapter 1I know this is a really, really, REALLY late review, but I just got around to watching Toy Story 3. I've been meaning to read this for forever, but I wanted to wait until I saw the movie and... yeah. I suck. I know.
Random side note before I get to ranting about how freakin' awesome that was: did you tear up at the end of the movie? I know I did. I got more upset than I did in the Notebook and Titanic put together. It wasn't that it was sad per-say, it was just Andy saying "thanks, guys." That made me break down.
Relevant note: This was freakin' adorable. It was perfect. I think you got all the characters do, including Bonnie, and, well, it made the sad ending ten times better.
-Dolphin |
 Sonic Serendipity 7/10/10 . chapter 1Hee hee hee. This was bully-I love little Bonnie, and you made her so cute!
And...*sniff*...I loved the movie! *waves hands helplessly* So...much! *tears* |
 tauruschorus 7/9/10 . chapter 1This is sweet. I like it very much. |
 samuraistar 7/1/10 . chapter 1I'm sorry I have no constructive criticism...actually, I don't 'have ANY criticism to offer, because I loved everything about this story!
You should do another one! You're like the only one that's actually done any playtime fics with Bonnie and the toys! You should do more of that; you're really good!
And while you're pondering that, I think I'll take a look at your other stuff! ;) Keep up the good work! (And the excellent formatting) |
 Alana-kittychan 6/29/10 . chapter 1Awww how cute |
 LittleMissySunshine 6/26/10 . chapter 1Wow, I'm impressed. I never thought a Toy Story fanfic would appeal to me. But, I really like this one. Good job and keep it up :) |
 Pricat 6/21/10 . chapter 1I love this!
Bonnie has a great imagination.
Also she likes Tortoro as I know she has a plush of him,lol.
Please keep going! |
 TrivialQueen 6/20/10 . chapter 1This is great! Bonnie's imagination is wonderful and very true to the narratives we're used to with Andy, but distinctly Bonnie. I do have a question about your reference to 'Canon' couples, does this just apply to Jessie and Buzz, Mr. and Mrs. Potato Head or will Bo return? Please say yes. If she returns or not I will still enjoy this story, but I thought I might ask. |
 Remember the Phantom 6/20/10 . chapter 1awww, i love this! its so sweet, and i love reading about their times with Bonnie :) [the ending to the movie made me want to cry, 'so long partner' had to be the saddest thing i have ever heard Woody say, and it dawned on me during the movie that while Andy grows up during the last 11 years, i grew up with him too **insert teary smile here** :')] |
 FaithInHim4ever 6/20/10 . chapter 1Hi! I really liked this story. It was really awesome! Bonnie is sooo cuuute! You wrote her really well! I can't wait to read more from you!
God bless |
 TenIsTHEDoctor 6/20/10 . chapter 1Woo! Great story! :D And yes, I did cry during the ending scenes of the movie. Disney has always held a very special place in my entire family's hearts and I grew up watching Toy Story and all the classics. Lol. I'm going to be a senior this year and I can't bring myself to get rid of my toys yet. Anyway, this was really good. Keep up the awesome job! :)
xoxo Much Love, Britt |
 Januarysixth 6/19/10 . chapter 1You have an excellent grasp of the characters and dialogue. It pairs nicely with your fresh and well thought out writing style. This isn't a critique, more of just a pat on the back - Go you!
Also, TS3 would've wrenched so many tears out of me had there not been painfully obnoxious people encompassing me from all angles. Can't wait for the DVD! I look forward to sobbing shamelessly in the comfort of my own home. |
 An Cathal Toirmisce 6/19/10 . chapter 1Interesting prompt, might I just say right now…
Haha, nice opening scene with them playing together; just like in the actual Toy Story movies! Your writing flows very well, doesn’t seem to have any mistakes, and I really like the way your writing Bonnie’s dialogue. It works very well!
The way you wrote for the Potato Heads was really funny. Extremely in character, and amusing to no end, particularly with the ‘dramatic fashion only a Potato Head can possess’ bit. I give you props for that!
Haha, Woody going off when Buzz and Jessie get together. That’s funny. Probably just going to do some Paso Doble, or something.
Aww, Woody still reminisces about Andy. That’s adorable, and very in character as well. I mean, hey, it wouldn’t feel right if he didn’t…
All righty, then. Let’s see, I really liked it! It was really well written, enjoyable, in character, and probably the best Toy Story fanfiction I’ve read so far (ever since seeing the movie, I’ve kind of been looking around in this section.) I’m definitely favoriting and alerting both this story and you as an author. |
 Puppkid 6/19/10 . chapter 1This is very well written! I love how I was able to follow along through the entire chapter with my mind supplying the images to go with it.
This is a perfect example of why a Toy Story 4 would still be possible. XD Though I'd hate to see the franchise dragged out past its due, something like this could always be possible. |
 Kinpaginpa 6/19/10 . chapter 1:D I just saw the movie a few hours ago! It was really a great way to wrap up these beloved toys' story. Haha, but of course there's always more to enjoy! This was the first story I clicked on, but I'm betting it'll be one of the best! Your characterization is great, and you got the happy feel of the playtime during the movie just right. I can't wait for more! |