Sasuke did seem OOC, but its very sweet ) and sad

Oh wow. This is gonna sound cheesy, but that really almost made me cry. You see, Sasuke and Sakura are my favorite pairing and well, I believe that you captured the characters in your story perfectly. You are a fantastic writer! Please continue!

aaawwww that was so sad...

Wait.. How did he die though?

Great fic, add a bit more details...

(but dont take that as a flame)

I think im tearing up right now...

STOP TAKING THE COMEDY OUTTA NARUTO

hands down your best fic !

although i think at some points your writing went a little flowerly, but other than that it was great :)

keep writing !

Aww this story is so sweet and cute, it almost makes me want to cry. Great Job Writing.

Aww the agnst, It is really good. Keep on writing you are doing a great job.

nice story... i like the idea actually... although sasuke is a bit OOC but that's okay... any sasuke that's sweet is a bit OOC... hahaha about the beta thing... PICK ME PICK ME PICK ME! hahaha sorry, i tend to be a little hyper at times... I always want to help others, meet new people and get new friends... so there... just send me a message or something if you decide to take me up on my offer... :D