"Little brother."

And then they start shooting.

Just kidding. Seriously, guys, jaykay. LMFAO

Awe and I'm sorry about your brother. And I don't know why you hate this, I loved it!

Well I'll be patient because at least you gave su the heads up :)

Ooooh, it's nice to read your works again. I've missed them. Especially the humor.

I absolutely adore this series...you've done such an amazing job. Now I can't wait for the next one. I love how every one is just different from one another :)

I'm sorry to hear about your brother. ):

I also hope that you have a nice time in China.

You're a great writer :)

-zanibarr

oh my jesus! this update absolutely made my day! i love the Chicago verse! thank you thank you thank you!

Yessss. Waffles. (I ate them for breakfast this morning LOL.)

Stop being so witty. Really, your Sakura is crazy funny. And awesomely random. Love it. Poor Sasuke has much patience.

Anyway. Great job, great universe you created. I'm liking the action-y parts too.

Aww, sorry about your brother. That must be really hard. :(

But have fun in Chinaaaa!

:D

Freaking love the Chicago!verse style. It pretty much rocks.

Coolio yo! I lurved it.

You should totally update in like 6 months!

hee :)

I always did like your Chicago stories. For some reason, Sakura's utter randomness and silliness (though irritating on most characters) suits her quite well, and I find it to be rather funny. Especially the waffles part in this fic. LOL. And I adore how Sasuke's all gangster-y and dark and mysterious and shit yet still manages to love Sakura in such a sweet way-you portray their relationship in a very non-cliche manner and I have to commend you for that.

So great job on this story and here's hoping to more Chicagoverse fics from you! :D

I like it!

It had waffles. And gangta!Sasuke which is always amazing.

BUT YAYA FOR MORE CHICAGO!

wow so kakashi and naruto were in on sakura's kidnapping also?

i can't believe that. I would think naruto would be happy for sasuke's relationship and help protect it

But anyways I', glad your continuing this chicago verse and I l ove you portray sakura its hilarious

update

:D was really glad that you put up another Chicago story! Can't wait to read more!

Absoluetly fantastic; made the previous week of exams worth it!

Good luck, enjoy summer xx

You hate it? I love it. :)

I absolutely adore this verse, and I was so excited when I saw the alert email in my inbox. Like, super "YAY" excited.

Sakura is hilarious and adorable, and Sasuke is a sexy gangster, and Naruto was in this one! A winning combination.

I hope the situation with you brother gets better, and have a nice time in China!

i'm so happy to see this! serious. i was just (re)reading your other chicago ones the day before yesterday and was like... WTF. this is not an ending. but this (while less of an ending) is great. because it has no complete at the top.

also. good luck with your brother. (i'll be praying for you. if you don't mind.)

and. have fun in china! remember the great wall smells like poo and has gigantic ginormous steps and go to the taiwan exhibit at the shanghai expo! ...if its still on.