omg... i dont know what to say... that was awsome... heh beats the hell out of my writing. maybe you should make a sequal or something? i mean... that was just... im speachless

Very cool.

*in tears* wow, that was some what sad. But this was very good. Now, keep in mind I have never read or watched what your story is based on. This is trully a very good story. Sandra sounds like more of spirit goddess Dragon ^_^. I will have to remember that kind of dragon, whenever I draw again ^_^. So yes this is Ganymede, the dragon of earth. I am four different people ~_^. I have been tracking you down on FF.net. Then I gave up went on my reviews again and clicked on your penname. Your Bio read that you had your own place in FF.net so. I clicked on that and found ya. I am so happy now, I love this Story. and Very much hope you update soon! Ja ne.

I don't think I've ever read a story written in the first person before it was different. I never considered the possibility that there were more than 4 guardians and now one with brood powers, i wonder if that's even possible? It is a good story, though a little short I hope you write another one Based of Andrax, that would be interesting.

hmmm such a strande story...however it is iteresting to read.

That was very well written. I've only really played BoF 4, so I don't have a scooby about the storyline, but it was very well written. I've learned any story written by you is worth reading, even if it is something I'm not interested in.

Story is okay. But as I recall, there were only four Guardians, none of them were named Andrax. Also, Garr was the only Guardian aside from Gaist that actually was disturbed by murdering the dragons, Gaist actually left the war because of his guilt while Garr was guilty as well, but finished the "war" but was still disturbed by it. Where does Andrax fit in? Was he erased from the record in Angel Tower because he killed his own people and became a deserter?

Thanks!
'turn into a mix of stone and chrysm' -- Hmmm..I never really though about that, but it's interesting now that you mention it.

^^ I Love Guardians!!! ^^ Thanks for pointing out the fact that Andrax's name wouldn't be normal for one. They all tend to start with G. *sniffs* my poor Garr....he had to turn himself into stone...I wonder if Andrax would turn into a mix of stone and chrysm? Part Guardian Part Brood? Ah just rambling on... Anyway I love your story. There should be more written about BOF III. Its such an amazing world.