Oh, what a fun story. I do love the slow seduction of Leliana by Marjolene and the ultimate outcome.

I don't know why this doesn't have more reviews - it was a wonderful, lyrical history of Leliana, and her vulnerability shines through so perfectly that I just want to give her a hug :-/ Great work!

O-O WOW! *Jaw drops*...this is superb! an excellent character study of Leliana, and srsly, the way you write her is fabulous! I could hear her voice while I read it, as if she herself was telling the tale to the warden in-game! This is going right into the faves!

I like the voice you found for Leliana. It's frilly, but vulnerable. I felt like she was the least developed love interest in the game, and I liked reading more of her story from you.