Cool! I hope you update again!

It's refreshing to find a good Parasite Eve fanfic in the works. Aside from a few minor spelling/grammatical errors, the story seems pretty solid, the pacing is good, and the cast feels in character.

Looking forward to reading more.

I love this story. I really can't wait for more. I can see a great story starting to form here. This could be good. Please keep it up.

Criticism for the delay? Do you know how much of a hypocrite that would make me? lol

Anywho, another good chapter. I especially liked the countdown scene where Aya is slowly reasoning her way through Eve's argument. And I guilt tripped my parents when I was a teenager too. ;)Your interaction between characters is great and its real, I like that. Please keep it up and continue to write when life allows for it! And I hope you make it through all your busy moments with the least amount of stress possible!

Awesome chapter.

Ah, nice start to a potentially thrilling story. Nice descriptive writing as well. Wonder how you will handle the action scenes? Look forward to finding out.

Maybe you could use the meeting of minds in chapter 2 as a flashback when Aya is actually on mission and in danger. She thinks back and how she got into this. This way you could draw the reader in.

This is great! Your writing style is very fluid and it draws the reader in. I can't wait for more, please update soon! There's too few good PE fics out there. And most of those have been abandoned. Please keep working on this one! :D

Another great chapter!

What the hell? This is an awesome story! Please continue.