Great story! I love it, its a really good piece. so sad and so sweet, i almost cried. i cant wait to read more of your stories!

That was so beautiful. I have tears streaming down my face. Bravo! This is an excellent story that brings out such emotion. I love it. The POV was especially interesting. Plz continue writing and never ever give up no matter what anyone else says. Now if you'll excuse me I have to go find a tissue!

*sniffs* That was so touching... So bittersweet and sad!

This was so incredibly sad and beautiful. You are an amazing writer to be able to bring out such emotions in your work. I cried so much for the Cullens. You should write a follow up of when Reneesme's older.

thats so sad :( poor edward and renesmee