Wordy this novella was a wonderful treat thank you

That was so freaking close...great way to an ending for these version of Edward & Bella! Now...how about a spy fic? This was entirely too close to Mission Impossible in my eyes. I would love to see you write one-I think your story telling voice is perfect for it!

I swear I watch TV too much...while I was reading this chapter-well the part where Edward is trying to master hanging upside down (LOL)-the theme song from Mission Impossible was running in my head, as well as the visual of Tom Cruise doing that stunt on the first movie. LOL

LOL Wasn't my last review about possibly reading about Edward's adventure as he participates in a heist that he himself initiated? I told you I went straight to reading your story-and I had no idea what else you wrote. But I am so glad to be reading this story!

Oh and poor Edward...learning from Em that he "hit that" too while having his ass kicked working out? Man talk about a blow to his ego. And then he proceeds to piss off Bella and instead of getting a snuggle after some pretty hot shower sex, he gets the ultimatum "apologize or you'll be taking cold showers alone?" Man, when you decide to teach Eddie boy a lesson, you don't pull your punches! I love it!

*sniffle* I want James to be happy.. waaaah. I seriously do.

That... was so nerve racking... XD I was all nerves... it was baaaaaah.

And *whew* close call there. I'm glad they're all fine. I loved it the suspense/action and the *aww* inducing reunion.

Other half that was amazing. :D

*whew*. Bitch Bella is one hell of a leader..scary!..she's awesome.

Oh crap, the pressure is on. Poor Edward.

Hahahaha... Emmett doesn't seem to have a mental filter. (I find it adorable, LOL)

Oh James.. the conversation reminded me how much I love him, and how much he cares for Bella.

*AWWWW* Charlotte! So adorable..XD *Aww.* Family time, I love them.

I loved it update soon

I was a nervous wreck reading this...literally on pins and needles. I don't think my heart can take any more heists, you write them too clearly. I can feel each and every sweat drop of nervousness as it cascades down Edward's back (of course that's a delicious thought process in and of itself...anyway...moving right along...) I really liked the team meetings and how everything gets processed and directed to individual members. And I really loved the switch back and forth between "professional-Bella" and "Oh-my-God-I'm-a-mom-now-what-the-hell-am-I-doing Bella". Nice job as always. Can't wait to read what you get into next. But no matter what it is I'll be coming along for the ride cause you my friend totally rock!

Good my love that was good.

A bit of intrigue abit of Mission Impossible abit of drama.

Then the family reunion at the end,god I love this Edward he just sounds soo beautiful, gotta pic of what you think he looks like?

Gotta say this little extra bit was really fun to read. And I am really interested to see you delve into something else.

love ya Netty

Jenny

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This was awesome..great chapter..It was like mission impossible...I was freaking out that she was going to get caught..Thank God she came to her senses..I gotta say it again..James is the man..I totally love..Don't get me wrong I love Edward but James...James is just..yeah..he's just..There are no words for him...Nice house he has...So is she preganat again? Is that why she put his hand on her tummy? Charlotte is so adorable..I am going to miss this but you are a such a wonderful writer. I look forward to reading more from you...Take care...your awesome

Aww bb that last part of the chapter, the 3 of them together was so sweet.

So Bitch Bella thats funny I suppose she has to be if she is the boss of the crew. What is different is that Edward is part of the team now, and you have put in the little hard part with the job for Edward as well.

I hope you don't make him fail. ;-)

Sweet funny and sad I loved it update soon

Great story. I love it.

Great chapter..they are working well as a team..Bitch Bella..I love it...It stinks that Charlotte will be leaving but she needs to be safe and the team doesn't need any distractions...Emmett has no filter..I swear...James is so calm cool and collected..God I love that man and I am glad that he and Edward are getting along so well...I am loving this and I have total faith in the team and and in Edward..they will succeed...Can't wait... LOVE IT

I find all the "prep work" amazing to read. I feel like I'm learning right along side Edward. I find his frustration with his own progress absolutely adorable. And I think we will all breathe a sigh of relief when he manages to pull this off. I really hope we will get to see him "save the day" in his own way. And I'm really hoping we get to see a full-on "proposal scene"...maybe?