duddddeee this was amazing! you should add cyrus to the next like as if he didnt die and have the rogues gunning out for him cos they are like awesome, dude this was kwl catcha l8r dude

learn some crap about the warriors b4 you go and write a crappy story. Cochise joined half way through not at day one and Swan would definitely pick the warriors over his hoe that lead to the death of his friends. I HATE U

this is good, man. its me, cherokee chief, this is one of my favs. so i added it. keep up the good work

Wow, surprise ending. I thought for sure that you'd have Swan take off with Mercy as a final decision, it always goes down like that in other fanfics lol. Overall, great one shot. To the point, had action, tragedy, and surprisingly a bit of romance. I barely registered for an account recently, and you're the first I'm adding to my favorites :D

By the way, can I just say, FINALLY we have actual Warriors fanfiction on this site! I was beginning to think no one would ever be brave enough to post anything! Now you've inspired me to do so. :)

Seriously I really love your two warrior fics! And yh more people should watch the movie however i got the game first and from then on i was hooked. Im working on a warriors fic atm bcause my other fics i believe arent your type. I cant wait till u publish the others! Again really well done it is a shame that not many people know about it x