“Just keep dancing, John.”

lmao!

that's SO funny. And this was such a cute story! great job!

Aw...too bad that it wasn't a proposal! But it was very sweet, and I loved it. Keep writing!

A Cutie pie!

Hi umm I am a big fna of the Lost World and I just wanted to say this was marvolously done. A Bravo to your efforts. They were well spent. I being a fellow writer understand ll the trials involved. Reep your rewards from this achievement in your writing.

-ADELINE CASSADY TAYLOR-

Awww...the ending is really sweet! When she smiled wickedly and told John "just keep dancing." Very nice ending there...I was jsut watching the secret over again today, and was hoping to find a fic that was in response to it. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Eva, I just realized I never did post a review of your story. My bad. For it deserves one! And a glorious one at that. You always manage to paint such a sweet relationship for Marguerite and Roxton, how could it not tug at one's heartstrings to see them so happy. I loved Challenger's words of encouragment and Roxton's gentle touches to reassure his love. Nicely done.

AWWW! I love it! Awesome everything - plot, characterization, dialogue...write more!

Wow Eva! nicely done. Keep up the good work!

Thats was simply beautiful i loved it even though i havent seen the secret yet it was wonderful.x

I loved the episode and I loved your story!

A very nice addition and a pleasure to read!

That was just what my heart needed :)

Wonderful ending! Especially the last dance!

OMG! That was BRILLIANT! Your characterization was PERFECT! I could totally picture this happening :) Sad thing is that I can't watch the new eps, cuz the station that airs TLW over here is showing season one eps. But reading fics about season three (like this one) are keeping me alive... :) Thank you thank you so much for the M/R shippery goodness... ! Absolutely LOVED this! Keep up the fantastic job!

Lovely, lovely! Thanks for getting this up so quickly after the ep! :-) I loved your description of Roxton waking up the morning after, and Marguerite finally cooking an edible breakfast! And picking flowers for her... and then tripping in her bedroom! Both completely Lord John Roxton, and what makes him so very delicious! :-D I also loved them ending with the waltz again! Always when I think the episodes can't get any better, you prove me wrong, Eva! Thanks so much for writing for us. Danielle :-)

Wow, that was lovely! Great finish for The Secret. It captures the essence of all the characters. Keep it coming! W're hungry for more!