Wow. That was amazing. I love this story..

:D :D

wow that was brilliant

love it , love it , love it

this is great!

I am totally engrossed in this piece I have read 9 chapters today and hopefully will be able to complete sometimes feels like I am watching the Becki for sharing your talents and your imagination

Really enjoyed your story! I started reading it just before you finished and I kept checking everyday to see if you'd added another chapter! I thought your ending was very good, it seemed to close the story very well. You're an excellent writer, keep it up!

Why hasen't anyone reviewed this? I would really like some feedback about this piece? Especially about the ending. At the moment i've had no reviews and i'm wondering if anyone liked it at all! Please calm my thoughts for me.

Becki X

I've enjoyed the story so far.

Sure post more please!

Please don't leave me hanging! I wanna know what happens next!

OOOH! This is getting exciting! I hope BA and Jimmy get there soon.

I'm glad you didn't take the Vietnam stuff out. It adds to the story.

I have been reading this, and I realize that you're still mixing tenses.

On the other hand, it's kinda funny to see Hannibal as a father figure type.

Ooooo... twisty. Suddenly Kate's convulsing int the hallway. Does she make it? Will Murdock ever wake up? :)

Yes, I would like the rest please!

Snickersmobo

Wow, This is really good. Can't wait to find out what happends next. Keep up the good work.