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Shadow Traveling Demi-God 3/27/13 . chapter 9Will There be more? |
TheWildFrenchie 4/2/12 . chapter 9sooooooo good ! No really I love it ! I have a hypothesis on who kidnapped paige... yeah I think caine is involved because HE was the one telling Drake to take stacy on a date ! WE miss U paige ! |
TheWildFrenchie 4/2/12 . chapter 2yeah it's really good and Paige is a beautiful name ! |
TheWildFrenchie 4/2/12 . chapter 1soooo cute ! |
emilyroorose 8/27/11 . chapter 9Please update soon I really wanna know what happens |
piratekaine 6/22/11 . chapter 9:O wow omg i want more D soon please this is so awesome i 3 all of it is is amazing after reading all chapters i was like omgrbgedfbjsvfv dbb please please please write more |
thesmokelives 1/1/11 . chapter 3Lol, I just had to cut in and say this, but LOL Drake called Stacy Jessica? Lolwut? XD |
chibigurl305 10/19/10 . chapter 9Amazing! I really enjoyed it! Ha ha daddy Drake! |
Helene2Troie 8/6/10 . chapter 1Yeeesh! Drake story! Love it! |
Caris L. Clearwater 7/11/10 . chapter 9Okay, let me just say that this is a very interesting idea for a story, and I like it. I think that for the most part both Drake and Caine are in character, though I think Diana slips from time to time. She seems a bit too heartless, and remember, she's supposed to be the good guy of the bunch. But other than that, I can't see any mistakes plot wise. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing serious. Anyway, fabulous work, Charms. I'm sorry to be coming in late in the story process, but I'm definitely going to keep up with it now. Update soon! -peace P.S. If you ever need to bounce ideas off of someone, I'm always open for a PM! |
WeAllLiveInAZazeySubmarine 7/10/10 . chapter 9WOW! This is really good! I loved the end of chapter 8 and i LOVED chapter 9! Please update soon! |
Miss Rouge Apple 7/9/10 . chapter 9Ooooh, peaches... Nummies! They're like little fuzzy nectarines! So cute! PAIGE! Poor Paige and poor Stacy... I wonder if she'll kill someone... Not Paige, though. She wouldn't kill someone. Well, at least, not at her age. LOL! But I'm seriously curious who would steal Paige. WHO? Please update |
Permanently 7/8/10 . chapter 9Oh chyea, I love them peaches. They be so delish, along with this story. ;D Keep it up, please! :) |
SummerFeally 7/8/10 . chapter 9great job! keep it up and update soon! ooh and thanks for the peaches. lol |
Valkerie 7/8/10 . chapter 9Stacy on the warpath! Diana is totally being Diana. :) And peaches...I love peaches...peaches are good... *eyes take on a glazed look; licks lips* Can't wait for Stacy to get her hands on the kidnappers. Grisly, gory death, anyone? Happy writing! Psycho out. |