this was really good...i wonder why you only have two reviews! that is just wrong! you caught and wrote Obi-Wan's pain perfectly! it was very well written and had great reflection of his grief. i am so glad Qui-Gon was there to help him through it all...great job, Qui-Gon!

AWWW! HOW SWEET!

This is so sad! But I love it! Poor Obi-Wan. We fanfiction authors can be so cruel sometimes!

Anyway, this more than just good work. Please wirte more!