Hmm... I always wanted to know what that driver thought that day. What you wrote had me to tears. I loved it how he cared about them and how he thought of his own family. Minor spelling mistakes but I still loved it. (:

Congratulations, you made the first fanfic that made me cry. You should be proud of this.

Oh, this was so sweet and so sad... i love Mr. Dunlap.

amazing! when i read the book i never gave an other thought to the guy who hit them!

well i liked it but you should have changed it up a bit

Wow. This was written SO well. I cannot even explain how good it was to read something that emotive, because that hasn't happened to me in a long time. It was really good that you paid attention to spelling, grammar and punctuation-btw, that's way up there on my list of priorities. So good job, keep writing!

Bye!

Ayla-Rose

I'm glad someone wrote a story in his point of view, I mean, can you imagine the psychological torment in his head?

You did a really good job on this story,I like it a lot

I never thought about it this way before, it's good

like your story ! :)