Great story! Um more detail on the mysterious guy would be nice. If there is going to be a relationship between Kaye and Justin, you should put more detail into it and hurry up and start defining it.

Um...this giant guy kinda sounds like !( spoiler)! Trobar. Are you mimicking him?

Hey im a girl and that was still a little bit... Um... Akward. The characters reacted probably how they would in real life , so good job with that! But people dont really write about that stuff just like they dontwrite about going to the bathroom. It's just kind of private. That's just my view thought.

Loveing the story but its been ages since an update...ANY chance of you furthering this tale?

This is an awesome story. I hope u post more

Wonderful cant wait for the next instalment of this story!

um helloooo? anyone hoo ooome? you do realise its been nearly a year right?
anyway, the fic is great so far, but maybe you should make the gwidion dude a little less creepy.

Please, please, please update this story soon! It's too cruel to end with something like that. I am liking the story though; just some of the spelling, punctuation and grammar (all that fun stuff) needs a little fine-tuning.

I loved it! It's soooo good, i felt like i was reading one of the actual ranger's apprentice books. It is so detailed, so artfully writen, i can see everything the character does in my head. The story comes alive! I think you kept the people in character very well too. All i can say is, a totally awesome job! On a scale of 1-10 this is a 13! I cant wait to red more! :)

And sorry if you get this twice, my pc messed up right when i sent it the first time so im not sure if you got it then or not.

loooooooooooveeeeeeeeeed it! can't wait for the next chapter![:

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Awesome story so far!

Please update soon!

I'd love to read more of this story, if you're willing to write it. Great so far- I've really enjoyed it. Please keep writing

I really have enjoyed your story. You have done a very good job mixing your OC's in and keeping the characters in character. I like the amount of detail you have and the pace of the plot. I was reading a chapter of this story late one night and I had a crazy thought where the story was actually written by John Flanagan just to see how people would react to a female Ranger on FanFiction. Yeah, that is a testiment to just how tired I was AND to how similar your writing is to the style of the original books. I really like it!

One thing I do have an issue with is the number of spelling errors. Well, more like word errors such as 'one' rather than 'on', 'he' vs 'she', etc. Also, you have some redundancies from chapter to chapter. For example the Halt quote about an unstrung bow being just a stick, you have that two if not three times in back to bac chapters. I think one good proof reading would get rid of a lot of those things.

Overall, I really love the story, the length of the chapters, the OC's, the consistancy to the books, and the speed and structure of the plot. However, I am worried you are getting bored or distracted and not going to write much more of this story. That would be a shame because you are a good author and I think you could manage to finish this story, even if it is not with the ending you originally intended, but with some form of ending as closure. You are talented as an author and I think it would be a sad for this story to die out.

Hey. Loving it so far. I haven't noticed anything ot be picky over. Keep it up c:

I'm unsigned-in cuz duplicate reviews aren't allowed, lol.

YAYS! You're back! :D This is, I'm pretty sure, one of the best female Ranger stories that I've read in this fandom (not that I'd read them anywhere else, as a later thought...hm). I just really enjoy reading all your different ideas :D

Also, I *love* the long chapters, but if it means faster updates short ones are fine. *hopeful eyes*

Gwydion (actually had to look up the spelling, haha) seems like he's gonna be a really awesome character! I love what you did there, with his unique-ness in way of speaking and his name. :D 'twas cool.

Pretty please update again soon!

-Dodo