Hey :):) sweet, cute, comforting, thats all I can say. :)

Aw, lovely. This is exactly the kind of ditzy voice she speaks with in the books, really well done. Loved the bits about Billy! :)

hey, this is good. really good. You've really captured who i picture ally's mum to be, and added your own little spark of personality. I hope you update soon, because i'm intrigued to see where this is headed! xxx

This was great! Really interesting to read something like this from Ally's Mum's point of view.

Great Job!

Oh my word. Stephie that was so beautiful! :-)