| Reviews for When Tomorrow Comes |
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prettyinpink21 7/28/10 . chapter 3I love it add more soon |
petuniatc 6/29/10 . chapter 3OK, Alejandro is now a dead man walking because Ziva will kill him if anything happens to Tony. Gibbs and Vance rescue Jackson and Ziva goes to Mexico to rescue Tony (with help from Mike)? |
zats 6/29/10 . chapter 3You should never have to make those kind of choices. Gibbs to the rescue...I hope. More soon please! |
Angelpoint 6/29/10 . chapter 3please choose Jackson! i mean he is a civilian and that goes first i the manual? and then Tony tries to escape? ooh i would love that... update soon! |
Nova42 6/29/10 . chapter 3great chapter can't wait to read more. |
Betherzz 6/29/10 . chapter 3good chapter, i am glad they know where tony is now at least and know that he didnt miss zivas ceremony willingly... i hope to holy hell they can get to both jack and tony before either dies... i cant wait to see what comes |
mncis 6/28/10 . chapter 3OH NO! I hope Gibbs can save them both. why so short? do a long chapter, if you can :) keep going this is getting interesting. |
Reader 6/28/10 . chapter 3 I hope this isn't going to be another "let's bash Tony because he missed Ziva's ceremony" fic, though it seems to be heading in that direction. Tony went to Mexico on Vance's orders, and Vance knew very well that Tony would miss the ceremony because of that. What was he supposed to do, tell Vance to shove his assignment so Vance could reassign him to a carrier again? And for all of Ziva's comments to Tony about "following orders", surely she would understand why he couldn't be there. To portray Ziva as whiny because he missed the ceremony is doing a disservice to Ziva. She should be ticked at Vance. And why, exactly could Gibbs not make it to the ceremony? He could have talked to Ms. Hart later that day, after the ceremony, or even in the car on the way to the ceremony. |
ACertainEloquenceWithWords 6/28/10 . chapter 3I really like this story alot it has lots of potential. TIVA 4ever! |
BnBfanatic 6/28/10 . chapter 3what a gfreat story and twist! Poor Gibbs! I would not want to make THAT decision. |
applemysteries 6/28/10 . chapter 3Tony or... Gibb's dad? That will tear the team apart! :( UPDATE |
applemysteries 6/28/10 . chapter 2TONY! AHHHHHHH! |
Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo 6/28/10 . chapter 3HOLY CRAP! I DON'T CARE HOW SHORT THAT CHAPTER WAS, I AM TOTALLY SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW! NOT MANY THINGS CAN MAKE ME SPEECHLESS, THIS IS DEFINATELY ONE THING THAT CAN! YOU CAN'T MAKE GIBBS CHOOSE BETWEEN HIS FATHER AND "SON"! GEEZ, WHAT EVIL, TWISTED WORLD DO YOU LIVE IN? WHAT WOULD ABS SAY? ANYWAYS, GREAT CHAPTER AND I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! |
Stephanie2233 6/28/10 . chapter 3Intense! I love it! I wasn't sure where this story would go and then you added a whole new dimension! I'm excited to see what happens next. Please update soon! |
gsr4ever 6/28/10 . chapter 3They need to save both! job |