 Mexicano27 5/8/12 . chapter 1When I saw that this story hadn't been updated in almost two years, I sadly resigned myself to the probability that you had just abandoned it. However, now that I actually checked, I see that you're actually planning on doing it over.
While I'm relieved that you haven't given up on it, I have to say that I think a rewrite is unnecessary, since I think it's perfectly fine the way it is. However, if you believe there's something wrong with it, then I can't fault you for trying to improve it. I just hope we'll be able to finally see some new content soon. |
 Athena's phoenix 4/29/12 . chapter 2Aaawwww, Zhao, you're so you're NOT a total bastard. Huh. Who would have thought? Well, I guess it's a good thing that SOMEONE likes Azula (other that Iroh and Lu Ten, who aren't there...).
I really really like this story! :D |
 Nerdman3000 4/3/12 . chapter 9This is an amazing story and I hope you update soon. I can't wait for the rewrite you are planning. Great story. |
 tksanders3 12/3/11 . chapter 9It would make my day if I were to get a story alert notifying me of a chapter 10 sometime in the near future. Just thought i'd share that. ;P This story has a lot of potential. |
 Greader 11/8/11 . chapter 9It's the end of October. Cough, cough. Hint, hint. Jk, can't wait for the update!. Seriously, I'll have to start writing my own stories for entertainment. |
 Savings 10/22/11 . chapter 1update soon |
 Nocturnal Only 7/5/11 . chapter 9I really love this fanfict, will you be updating soon? Please tell me you are! |
 ljv 4/25/11 . chapter 9You're a wonderful writer. Please finish this. It is original and just so well written which makes it a shame that it isn't finished yet.
The development of Azula is well paced and I am looking forward into seeing her manifest into something great. |
 LifeTimesWorth 4/22/11 . chapter 8YOU NEED TO UPDATE! SO YOU UNDERSTAND! |
 Liviania 2/9/11 . chapter 9Intriguing AU. I hate seeing Zuko grow up to be such a jerk, however. It makes sense though.
Livi |
 ElDragonRojoX 2/7/11 . chapter 1good |
 FrozenShadow52 1/16/11 . chapter 8Well, I thought I knew who the phoenix was, but now I'm not sure. Love that Sokka and Katara made a cameo! |
 Furionknight 1/6/11 . chapter 9Really quite interesting, I look forward to more :) |
 FrozenShadow52 12/29/10 . chapter 7Even though this is supposed to be Mai's chapter, I found Zuko's small role to be the most interesting. He's kinda like Azula in cannon, but not a carbon copy,which I like very much. I think Mai summed him up pretty well: he doesn't mean to be cruel, he just doesn't know any better.
You're really good at showing how complex the lives of the noble's are; especially for the girls. |
 Tar Irene 12/19/10 . chapter 9Your writing is very, very good and you have done a lot of creative things with this story. You take your time in telling it and I've really enjoyed it. I would really like to read more. |