Good but pikachu is a he not her. And Misty's Togepi is male sense you didn't know

where's the rest of story

LOL! poor brock!

Ash took one look at the scene and walked into the kitchen. "I'm hungry. What's for dinner?"

lol!

This cracked me up. Too funny... And I'll be looking forward to that AAML fic!

Poor Brock. hehehehe.

ROFL!

LOL! Poor Brock, though...

Woop woop with the insanity! *looks at the story again, shudders* Barney...evil... *looks at the endnote again, shudders* Valley girl...evil... Keep up the good insanity! Woop woop!

Giggleicious! Don't you DARE write a bad AAML young lady!

I thought it was really good...

continue PLEASE !

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Aw, Togepi is such an evil little bugger. Dana liked it! Dana feels better. She thinks. But she's not sure... *sigh* Dana also doesn't feel like signing in. *sigh deux*

Aiiiiii! Stupid Togepi! *pulls out a frying pan and a spatula* I'll teach you to hurt Brock! TOGEPI, SUNNY-SIDE UP!

LOL the TV shows...BBCKanto? Isn't that geographically impossible? _ And Barney! Have mercy, I'm surprised Brock didn't go comatose then. I love Brock POV fics or ones that are comedies about him...I wonder why I seem to think of them as one and the same? He's just got the funniest dilemmas and thought processes. And ooh, like, about the author's note, I like totally dig that AAML type story, kay? Like, write it, fer sure...just please, don't make one of Misty's sisters the narrator, cause I'd be skipping the word "like" about every third word... LOL _

The egg! Bad Egg! EVIL TOGEPI! poor brock

Oh my the Satanic Egg Thingy! Poor Brock can't move anywhere and tortured by the EGG! Nice work Jenn - and at the end - you were sounding scarily like Misty's sister - real Valley Girl.