Awsomeness, i think you should write a another chapter to this one; like where it is focusing on Cloud and Leon and the Most imprtant person thing or something like that... just an idea but i did love it and im bookmarking it for updates so pwease! write more lol

This is perfection. I laughed soo much! I loved when was Leon in the 'torture Cloud mode', and when Cloud kept talking/yelling at his dick. I loved when he called it a "selfish fucker" I laughed so hard my parents asked if I was okay from the other room.

I would love to read a follow-up fic with that 'sexy butt plug' being used. XDDD

omfg COME ON! I WANT TO KNOW! PLZ TELL MEEEE! ahem sry for fangirling, but i think cloud got his dick cut off, in my opinion...remind me NOT to makie him mad agAain...that would be a nightmare O_O

Hilarious! And I got to say Cloud isn't innocent. He does deserve it but anyway... Good writing style... good grammar... good story!

hahahha, Cloud sooooo deserves italthough, kitty Squall does sound kinda nice...

oh wow, I really want to see what happens to cloud. More please!

For the love of god! Do not castrate him! However I do love this little story, good job :D

Your portrayal of Leon just makes me giggle like crazy. Please write more! You are one of the few writers who make Leon as the uke (and I totally agree with you there!)

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Lol! Lol! Lol! That was the funniest thing i've read in a long while, thanks so much for writing it. I think that Cloud deserves what's coming to him, even though I'm not much for mutilation its still funny to see him squirm while a blade is held up aginst his private parts.

Thanks for a great story! I had fun reading it!

I don't think cloud deserve to be castrated, think of all the fun leon would miss... Hehe :)

Ohoho! 0 Yes, Cloud does indeed deserve it.

Very well written and very humorous! I enjoyed reading it!