 Umbrae Calamitas 8/8/08 . chapter 5 "Darkness beyond twilight, crimson beyond blood that flows..." Yes, I am going to blow you to smitherings. For two reasons.
One: Amelia is NOT, and I repeat: NOTNOTNOTNOTNOT(damnit)NOT allowed to marry Billy, William, suitor number 7003. I don't care if he's hot, funny, amusing, whathaveyou, No. No. No. No, don't make me hurt you.
Two: WHERE ARE THE UPDATES? WHERE? Unless I am reading the date wrong (blast them for having it all numerical), this hasn't been updated since 2002?
2002? Holy gods, woman! Update, please! PLEASE! I have reviewed every story in this series, now please update? I will slither on my draconian stomach before you and whimper in the piteous voice of the wolf whose heart I share, but please update...
Please?
Umbrae Calamitas, too lazy to log in |
 kazster 10/15/07 . chapter 5I thank you for your stories and hope you one day finish this series. |
 anon 11/12/02 . chapter 5 Oh my... What is Amelia going to do? Can't wait to find out the answers for 'The Road to Recovery'. William is such a sweet guy! |
 beltsquid 8/19/02 . chapter 5! Oh my! Now whatever shall she do? Your writing gets better with every chapter, again I love its lyrical quality _ And would Danny's name be a tribute of sorts to Daniel Cronin? Anyhow, get cracking on your other stories so you can work on this one again! Fanfiction is love!
-Cyn |
 Lauren-sama 8/18/02 . chapter 5Wow! What a cliffhanger. It's really nice how you're portraying Amelia's suitor as a decent guy, instead of just some unlikable person whose only purpose is to set a barrier between Zel and Ame. I really look forward to seeing her respond to the question... I'll patiently wait until you finish 'The Road to Recovery', which should be fun to read as well. As long as you're writing at least one of your Slayers fics, I'm happy... I really enjoyed this chapter. |
 Kaitrin 8/18/02 . chapter 5Oooo! I knew it! As soon as William said he had a little brother, I knew it! Hah hah! And I was right! Hee hee! I really love the way you write Amelia. I can hear her voice in my head as I read and she comes across as very believable. What a situation you've put her in though. Wonder what she'll do when she finds out who William's little brother is! |
 Saotome 8/17/02 . chapter 5WOOOOOAAAHH! Oh man! Say yes, say yes say yes! I like this guy! Way to go! |
 Winged Dancer 8/17/02 . chapter 5I wonder why I hadn't read this one yet?
It's a great look at a more mature Amelia, and that part about learning politics thanks to her travels with lina and Co. is great.
It's also cool how it's getting um... 'mixed' with The Road to Recovery (Can't find a better word), and therefore I hope you'll finish both soon P |
 beltsquid 7/31/02 . chapter 4Wow, this really is quite gripping. I like how hanging around with Lina and the gang turned out to be a positive influence on Amelia, rather than a 'negative' one _ I like the way you work mentions of her mom and sister into the fic, and expand on Amelia's character in a believable way. Go team Amelia! Crush injustice! And er...wait for Zelly. p I like your lyrical style and I'm a-waitin for more!
-Cyn |
 Amechan84 5/12/02 . chapter 4Whoa!You've written again!
I adore this fic,please,continue to write it and...W Amelia!
P.s and Zel?Ohoh,I'm so curious! |
 MoroTheWolfGod 5/11/02 . chapter 4Kewl! But when's Zelly coming into it? Ooh is Zelly gonna come in all battered and beaten? I sure hope so! heehee fear me... Please Continue! |
 Lauren-sama 5/11/02 . chapter 4*is feeling wonderful and honored because of that author's note* Waiiii! Thank you so much! Anyway, this chapter was marvelous; characterization was great, and it's always wonderful to see a strong Amelia in fics. It's very interesting that she likes politics, and she seems incredibly capable of becoming a great leader. I wonder if Zelgadis will get some sense in his head and come back to see her sometime... |
 t 5/10/02 . chapter 4 Happy that you are writing again. |
 Elderdrake 5/10/02 . chapter 4Hooray! Hooray! At last an update to the coolest Amelia-focussed 'fic out there! And let me add that you should _never_ doubt your characterizations. Not a whit of OOC anywhere here. And... does this mean this and your other tales are going to be updated more, and soon? I'll be checking every day (heh, heh, no pressure) _;; |
 EverythingIsMagic 5/10/02 . chapter 4WAII! You mentioned me in your notes! Anyway, a truly amazing story. I don't know if you're done, but even if you are it's very complete as it is. I think this is the best characterization of Ame I've ever seen. It reminds me why I love her character so much! |