very nice and humorous!

LOL!

Very amusing.

I particularly love Vala's notations. ;)

Shae

Ha, that's great!

You really captured the contrast between the two alien woman.

I really loved the following line:

"they're part of an Athosian custom next time they annoy her"

ROFLMBO!

Fabulous!

Heehee. That was funny.

so funny so great:)

BLOODY HILARIOUS! You captured both of their personalities beautifully - I can just imagine Vala smiling and snickering as she wrote this and giving a small, amused smile as she handed the report in! As well as the exasperation the higher-uppers would show. Hahaha!

Brilliantly done! 2 thumbs up and 10 out of 10 stars!

I had a good old laugh, very IC I love these two characters so thankyou heaps.

Best bit was when vala was like cam and the boys got chased up a tree. I literally laughed out loud! :)

Loved it! I was giggling madly. I love how Teyla is proper and attempting to be kind to the boys for getting chased by giant snails, and how Vala is happy to just make fun of them. Awesome. I hope to read more stories about Teyla and Vala. They seem like they'd get on really well.

Hilarious. Excellent and very funny.

two words- love it!

Mercedes Lackey wrote a song (filk?) called The Leslac Version. This is better. As funny as Vala's version is alone, having Teyla's version just makes this rolling on the floor while the other patrons stare hilarious.

Excellent - love the contrasting report styles. And the snails, old ladies, etc.

That was well done. I think you captured both characters really well. i could see them saying what you wrote for them. the whole thing was well done and it was funny to see the conflicting ideas in the reports thanks for sharing this.