Who gave you permission to do that? Here I am, looking for some wonderfully sappy Lance/Pietro and whamoh! You hit me with some angst.

Okay, kidding, really. I loved this story. It's really well written and the song fits beautifully. Very...poignant...yes, that is the word I'm looking for.

really good, you should continue and tell on from there

That was so sad, yet it was written so beautifully. I really enjoy Lance/Pietro and you wrote this really well.

hey, its great...good job. byes now!

Suraka-chan

Aw, how sweet. Please write more!

good very good. thats all i can think to say at 3:40 in the morning.

Oh my goodness, that was so sweet and sad. I loved it. I love Lance/Pietro for one thing, and I love the stories even more when they are this well written. And that's three times I have used the word love about this story, I am sure you get the picture! The comment about the Robin Hood fox had me giggling one moment and then the next I am practically sobbing at my computer...great job )

That was soooo saaadddd! I love this fic! Extremely well-written, lovely perspective and realistic as well. The thoughts going through Lance's head are so REAL and so was Pietro's reaction, both to Lance coming home and the kissing thing. Also, the lyrics suit the fic perfectly. I love all the references to the moon, as well as Lance's thoughts on being gay. Wow, that was incredibly real, the part where he says that the word 'gay' used to mean happy, but now it has so many different synonoms, etc. This is a great story and I truly have no idea why you only have three reviews for this. Beautiful story.

This is excellent stuff. Poor Lance. It seems that he SHOULD get another chance, 'cause he realized what he was doing, as regards Kitty and the X-Men, was bogus, but, well, life don't always work that way. Wonderful!

ack! how am i supposed to get inspiration to write my own evo slash when this stuff makes me feel so inadequate? my stuff sucks compared to this. dammit. _

*sniffles fruitlessly* omg, quit killing me with unrequited lance/pietro slash! that was lovely...

*starts bawling* and now i want to hear that song... but that was so freakin' gorgeous...