It's cute. I loved reading it. I thought the ending was ok.

Okay, after an epic amount of waiting for you to write again, this review needs to be epic, too... but I'm afraid my brain's not working well enough for epic.

So... great job! :P No seriously, it was a great job. I like the way you've splitted the chapter, the different scenes, the different occasions and times. I especially loved it when Brett finally told her how he felt and they kissed ... and everyone was watching them. Cody and Teddy just "knowing" that they have feelings for each other and all... totally cute.

Sweet story, beautiful ending :)

wow that was awesome! 16 pages of awesomness!