It was good.

I enjoyed the story but I would like to point out that it should be marked as complete if you are not planning on posting anymore chapters.

Great story! If you ever decide to continue this story I suggest you have the next pairing be Bella and Jane. just a thought, though.

Great first chapter. This is my first time reading this story and i really enjoy it so far.

u r bat-shit crazy

Good fic
Write another chapter its great

I think Bella should leave him.I don't give a rats ass if he loves her or not , what she did did not deserve that and Jane didn't either. If he really loved his wife he would have thrown his sister out after that first remark, so I hope that Jane gets hurt bad by one of the men she keeps driving away, and Bella divorces Alec.I try not to be to hard on stories but I really did not like this one, although (if they are not like this) I'm sure the rest of your stories are really good.

Wonderful story though i do think Alec was a little harsh on her. He can have her lie or be disrespectful because both ain't possible.
I believe that an Aro and Esme story would be a good challenge for you. Or possibly Aro and Bella or Jane.

Oh gosh! Continue! I can't believe Alec would do that. She should say to Alec something like 'you care way more about your sister then me.' or leave or something. I can't believe you did that without Shane getting punished! It was good but don't stop there! Please more rebellion from Bella and don't let him treat her that way! :( please continue

i hate edward bella or jake bella pairings i luv tht u did an alec pairing

I really liked that...there aren't many Bella Alec stories. I think you should continue with this,maybe add another chapter with fluff or even do anoter story with these 2 or maybe a Jasper Bella "lovers" story. Hope to read more in the near future :).

i had a cute idea bella adopted jane and alec when they were little and now there older and get into some much trouble bella has to spank thm both :) trust me my friends love that idea

You sick bastard. That was beyond fucked up. I hope you get married and they do that to you everyday. That would make me happy.

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this is a very goo d storie i think you should have some more chapters but it was good :) :) !

mabey you should do one wwith bella and felix or mabey brotherly love alec and jane btw great story i no what thats like