|Reviews for Opheliac|
| sloppycoppy 7/10/11 . chapter 19
I gotta say, I'm lovin' this fic! Sokka and Azula are interesting together, being (in my opinion at least) the two masterminds in Avatar. The plotting and planning is enjoyably complex, and keeps me on my toes:)
You also do a great job of portraying a recovering-from-madness Azula, and the way she tries to smother how deep certain things strike a cord in her. ( By the way, I think it's fitting, the way Zuko lied to Ursa.)
Hope this story continues, 'cause it is most definitely an intriguing fic!
| Guest 6/25/11 . chapter 19
Hello. I just finished reading what you have and it's a great story. I noticed you havnt updated in a while and I hope that you update really soon. :) I love Azula she is by far my favorite character and Mai seems to be mean and annoying (only my opinion of course). Please update soon! I want to read what happens! :)
| Fell's Blessing 5/21/11 . chapter 19
Hooooly craaaaap. This has got to be one of the best and most intriguing and thought-out Avatar fic I've read in YEARS. Everything is just so...flawless and fits in perfectly together like a puzzle.
| Harlequin Jade 5/19/11 . chapter 19
Usually any story that has Maiko and Kataang in it makes me sick. But this story is just so damn good, I've fallen in love. Azula is definitely my favorite female character and to have her as the main person in a story where Zuko is alive and is Fire Lord just makes me giddy. Can't wait to read more!
| Victorian Lily 5/17/11 . chapter 17
Pure amazingness... I came across this fanfic on ASN and I am in love with it. It's better than most post-war fics around and from Azula's point of view, which I enjoy. (Most likely 'cause I'm a deranged, psychopathic, firebender/Azula wannabe in my head, and a bit insane in all other respects, but...)This is a job well done, and so far this is my favorite chapter.
I have no constructive criticism to offer at this point because I'm too happy. :] Keep writing!
| anchor7 5/15/11 . chapter 19
Just wanted to say I love your story! Its one of the few fan fics that has caught my attention enough to stick with it and I have been following from some time. I would REALLY like it for you to update soon because I'm the sort of reader who doesn't want to stop once I like the story. The only thing I have to say is that Azula seems to be becoming less and less as you had originally wrote her and I would think that even though she's not as insane just to keep Azula a little more like her original. Thank You and please update!
| Black Hearted Ninja 5/2/11 . chapter 19
| Sera 4/28/11 . chapter 19
I really like your story! I find it to be an accurate portrayal of a possible epilogue to ATLA. And I like the idea youve created with Zuko lying to Ursa about Azula. It fit, and Azula's reaction seemed to be perfect. Being raised as she was and the way she's portrayed in the series, the reaction you've given her really suits her. I also enjoy the mentality you give her and how you show she's conniving but fragile.
I've read this in one go and it's been intriguing from the beginning until now. I especially love how you have Azula tell Aang how it is. Of course, she is correct. As Avatar, though it may not be fair, much is expected from him despite his age.
I can't wait for you to update. Your story is very interesting. Please update soon!
| anon 4/13/11 . chapter 14
Definitely not a fan of your OCs, but I've never much liked them in fanfiction anyway. That aside, great fic
| Guest 3/25/11 . chapter 19
You are a bastard.
A completely, utterly, brilliantly magnificent bastard.
Of all the things I was expecting to happen, that - that right there - was not one of them.
| Yami Vizzini 3/23/11 . chapter 19
Boy golly, I never expected Ursa's reunion with her kids to involve being thoroughly duped (about what precisely?)! As awkward as it's going to be, I hope it all comes out in the end and they can work through it- and so far you've been faithful enough to the characters that I doubt you'll leave the lie standing indefinitely (though for a good while all the same).
This is a wonderfully written and plotted story, and even better, it's been updated within the last month! Keep it going (when you can).
| Dance Elle Dance 3/18/11 . chapter 19
This is one of my favorite fics in the A:TLA fandom. I adore what you're doing with it so far, and I love how you write Azula. Sokka/Azula is one of my favorite pairings and you are just writing it so well. Can't wait for your next update!
| cognitive dissonance 3/13/11 . chapter 19
Eeee I just read this all in one sitting and tis amazing! :D
| Masta Revan 3/13/11 . chapter 19
Dude! This chp was short but sweet! I LOVED IT ALOT! I found it to be very deep for some reason! Great Job! Im always excited to read your work.
| Kigaroo 3/9/11 . chapter 19
Finally you updated!
Love this chapter! Ursa and Azula reunited!
Zuko is pretty good liar lol