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clobojojo 3/18/12 . chapter 1
*Cough* has anyone killed mayrui? No? Well then someone needs to fix that problem! XD

He is one creepy ass mo fo.. *shudders* but seriously it's all one big chaotic family at the end ne? So typical! XD I'm glad that Renji and shuuhei figured out in the end! :3 but I think for her 1st birthday I think a scientist on a sword would be a good gift no? ;)

Keep writing! I really enjoyed how the characters acted like themselves! It was great! I hope you keep writing!
Kyotine Neko 404 9/13/11 . chapter 1
hi!

It'ss very surprising because you have succed to make me like a m-preg' story when I dislike this. It's amazing for me! I still don't know why, but your text is a success. Congratulation!

Bye
a heart for you 6/21/11 . chapter 1
OMG squeales that was so cute and adraoble ppl dont make enough mpregs and this was awsome :)
I'mSecretlyANinjaTimeLord 1/8/11 . chapter 1
awwwwwwwwww

i loved it

I 3 renji/shuuhei!
Corky The Cat 8/8/10 . chapter 1
I LOVE this story no matter how many times i read it XD
TealEyedBeing 7/13/10 . chapter 1
Aww! x3 that was one of the best, most perfect and absolute brilliant ShuuRen fics i've ever read! x3 i daresay its my new absolute favorite too! :D
kimmie-reivers 6/30/10 . chapter 1
This has got to be the best mpreg I've read im a while!
relic yuy 6/26/10 . chapter 1
Usually I don't like Mpreg but because this is ShuuRen, I just had to read it. I was more than a little surprised that I liked this and that you did a great job. Mayuri's interference makes the mpreg credible.

On top of that, you did a great job with Shuuhei and Renji. There were lots of moments that were easy to relate to and as a parent/mother and you did them in a way that didn't make Renji feminine. For instance, the torment Renji felt when he was contemplating termination. That is no easy decision and I loved Shuuhei's support.

Renji's sensitivity to showing was adorable in a very brooding way. The hormones was great. Kuchiki Taichou is perfect. You captured him very well. Shuuhei beating the crap out of the 7th seat was great although I think maybe he got off too easy.

Overall, you captured the stages of pregnancy and all the shit that goes with it beautifully. Well done.
cake 6/23/10 . chapter 1
omg can you write a yuri version of this? Where rukia gets orihime pregrant? I would seriously love you forever
Gypsygrrl 6/23/10 . chapter 1
This was...so cute! I laughed through the whole thing (I think the boys should be thanking Mayuri now, no?) And Byakuya! Oh man! He's totally gonna be wrapped around the little one's finger. *nods head* Yup, yup.

Thanks for the laugh this morning!
Sergeant LemoOoN 6/23/10 . chapter 1
Aww how lovely, I really enjoyed this :)

will there be a sequel?

xxx
StrayDogAndTheMoon 6/23/10 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this a lot. Open ending ending..which is more realistic in this case. I think what Renji did in the end suit him more. Although it is scary to think of bringing up a baby very unexpectedly in his case, but BECAUSE of who he is as a survivor and warrior I would of thought he'd have the baby in e the end.
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