Eep! This was sooo kute (with a 'k')! I really loved this oneshot! Usually, I like ones where Seto is kept in character, or what we know of his character, but... I liked this because even if he wasn't being his "normal self", it somehow stayed in character. Like him being dominant and serious. Loved-ed it lots! Keep up the good work!

I had to stop myself from saying "Aawwwwww." I was in the car with my dad and brother while reading this. I did have this smile that wouldn't go away,though they though I was smileing for the trip we were going. I love the story and found it cute.

Love it :D

I really love it :D

Oh my gosh!

Its true you do write ryou/seto! Which is my second fav pairing (after jou/seto)

But this shouldn't be a one shot. You just wrote one of the best ryou/seto fics I've ever read. Please keep writing. You know what, you're just a fantastic writer. Over all just amazing.

PS. I read Heart ect ect. And somethings wrong and it wouldn't let me review. But it was a great chapter. I hope they have fun on their date to the fair.

PPS Jou now can punch bakura in the face!