Phew. For a second there, I was afraid you were going to kill off my favorite character. I wonder what he's run off to do? Update, please!

good story please keep on updating

WHAT THE HECK CAUSED YOU TO TAKE SO LONG! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES AND CHECKING BACK FOR SO LONG, but now I am happy because you did update.
-_-; and you just had to leave it on a cliff hanger didnt you? Gr...
-S.T

Finally! Finally! Finally!
how could you leave us waiting for ages?
*sob*
Shneek: *pats her back* The new chapter is there, it's alright...
*sigh* yes. and what a wonderful one that is! _ I love it! Continue! (SOON!)

hurry up and write the next chapter!

sorry, I actually do sign in but ... eh, whatever.

anyway, please UPDATE this!

gigantic please!

biggest please you can imagine!

and...

PLEASE!

This story is great, I wish their were more chapters. Please Update ASAP, though I fear that I might not have time to read it because of school.

CURSE U SCHOOL!

Newayz,

keep up the good work, ;)

This is a very good story. I really like it. Kinda cliffy and I cant stand it. Gr...

PLEASE, update soon. I really like this story and their should be another chappie.

Hey, whoa, time out!

You can't possibly end it there! It's inhumane!

YOU HEAR ME? INHUMANNE!

Even though im not one to read romance and such. I LOVE THIS STORY! HAHAHA! If you dont update i will be forced to hold a protest. This is a GREAT story, and one with very little -maybe none- spelling errors or quwotation errors. I really like it and it would make me happy if you could finish the story!

Update soon,

Auden

the story is amazing! i wish i had discovered it earlier!

anyway, please continue soon!

[and the Japanese ... you could add translations at the end of the chapter so you can use it more often and people who don't speak it will understand it]

0_0! Bad Parachi-chan! How would he know about that? Wait... I don't want know. Anyway, good chapter, looking forward to more. :)

Aha. Very interesting. _ Update, please!

Aw, Parachi-chan to Chibi-Onis wa totemo kawaii ne! - I wonder, though, how is Hyrule going to greet it's new guest?

Methinks Ramina had a bit too much coffee this morning. _ Anyway, good chappies, although still . . . what's with the R rating? I think it's more like PG13. Anyway. Thanks for the little acknowledgement in chapter 14.

.:rai:.

Very interesting story you've got here. I like you're style, it's got good flow. It's strange though. I mean, Ganondorf is like this horrifically horrible person, yet enter Ramina-san and slowly there's a different side to him, like something lighter but not. It's confusing. But now with Zelda's freaky dream... it's so sad that there's not another chapter to read! Please continue soon? -