I'd really like you to see this through, it has too much potential to just leave it like this. I swear this fandom is way under-rated.

Continue!

May i ask r u gonna continue this? This is sooo good. I've been waiting for ur update (i literally jumped in joy when i see chapter 3)

i really want to see this through.

This story needs lots of love and cookies and possibly rapid plot bunnies. You're going a good job so far keep it up

yeeessss I want to see this through too! this is really good and and the idea really creative :)

I do have an ff account but can't remember the email and password I used but to the point-

I immensely enjoyed reading the two chapters you have posted and is by far the most original Chaos Rings fanfic I've encountered since most writers can't seem to break away from quoting the original dialogue and events as appear in game - so this is truly a refreshing change of pace.

I realize the unlikelihood of this story being updated any time soon considering the number of chapters and publishing date - However I feel compelled to at the very least let you know how enjoyable I found the read in the perhaps vain hope that it may someday be updated...

I appreciate your use of paragraphing and the portrayal of the characters. Escher, over whom I immediately developed the dreaded fangirl crush, is especially well done and the law firm setting is brilliant!

The playful banter between characters had me grinning all the way through and I applaud you for the vocabulary range.

I hope you enjoy reading this at least half as much as I did reading your fanfic.

Wishfully thinking,

Chio

I love the game and I'm still in the process of finishing it.

I liked how you twisted it and set it in a different timeline

Great story

please update

Yes i really enjoyed your story :D. I've just finished playin' Chaos rings and really 3 it. This is my favorite couple too. Please update the next chapter(s) :)). Can't wait!

I'm not sure if you're going to continue this story, but I really do enjoy it. I like how you stay true to the characters but throw them in different circumstances. It offers some amount of familiarity but with a nice element of surprise. I look forward to see how you incorporate Olgar and Vahti into this if you continue. :)

Thank the lord that you finally updated! I was starting to think I'd never see more of this! Great chapter, I can't wait to see you update

love it!

The two are my favorite couple!

YAY another Chaos Rings fanfic!

This is pretty cool, and a totally different approach of a story starring musiea and escher. Very well done! Update soon XD

I've never really taken to AU stories, but looking at how the characters are very in character, it looks like a promising read :)

Looking forward to the Escher/Musiea!

It's a great story and I can't wait to read more, but let me tell you that the best part of it was how you made all their conflicts and characters modernized, like you didn't just go out of your way to make it current, you actually made sense with everything. I loved how Ayuta was asleep on Mana's lawn, haha Anyway continue please :)